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And how the heck did you draw those damage details man?
As far as shoulders go, I like'em big. Blame WoW and orc shoulder size. I got addicted. Cheers.
If i had to point out one thing it would be the bolt pistol shown in the right marine's hand. Its too small at least from the angle shown here. Though I admit it may just be the angle of it. A good estimation i find is that one should remember that the bolt pistol and a standard bolt gun actually fire the same ammunition. The only differences is barrel length (including the casing around said barrel and the forward grip that would normally be on a bolt gun.
Looking closer i notice that the bolt gun in the left marines hand is perhaps a tad too tall. I would shorten it by about a 1/4 or less. maybe 1/8th of its size now. But at the same time i still think it was done very well. Another note, though this one is rather unimportant, The slide and opening where spent casings, would come out. i would make it a little larger. maybe half again. I know the bigger it gets the more ridiculous it looks, but one should remember that the bolt rounds in an astartes Bolt gun are very large caliber. But again just a minor thing and one that most folks probably wouldn't notice.
All in all though? Great work. you've made a realistic looking set of space marines here and not many people are able to pull it off well. My applause. instant fav.